2021年澳洲本科留學(xué)個人陳述需要注意什么？

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　　選擇去澳洲留學(xué)，個人陳述是很重要的申請材料，怎樣寫才能更吸引招生官，提高自己被錄取的幾率呢？

　　個人陳述的基本寫作內(nèi)容

　　1.教育背景：你的大學(xué)專業(yè)是什么？你為何選擇這個專業(yè)？通過多年來的專業(yè)學(xué)習(xí)，你學(xué)到了什么？與你選擇的專業(yè)有什么關(guān)系？

　　2.工作經(jīng)歷：你曾經(jīng)擔(dān)任過什么樣的職務(wù)？這幾年來的工作中有什么業(yè)績、學(xué)到了什么？

　　3.社會活動組織能力：在大學(xué)期間曾經(jīng)參與或組織過什么活動？曾擔(dān)任什么樣的職務(wù)，從中又學(xué)到了什么？

　　4.最滿意的一次經(jīng)歷：最滿意的一項(xiàng)工作或科研學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷是什么？是怎樣做好它的？

　　5.最突出的才能：你認(rèn)為自己最突出的方面是什么？如領(lǐng)導(dǎo)能力、組織能力、交流溝通能力或是協(xié)調(diào)能力。

　　6.學(xué)習(xí)計劃和目的：學(xué)習(xí)期間的學(xué)習(xí)計劃是什么？與你的職業(yè)追求、職業(yè)目標(biāo)又有什么關(guān)聯(lián)？

　　7.獎勵：你曾經(jīng)受過何種獎勵？你是否擔(dān)任過助教？你是否有優(yōu)秀的論文曾經(jīng)得到發(fā)表或受到獎勵？

　　8.特長愛好：你的特長與愛好是什么？

　　書寫過程中需注意的事項(xiàng)

　　1、突出個性化

　　在個人陳述的開頭，可以用你一個獨(dú)特的故事開始你的個人陳述，以充分的個人情感表達(dá)對這個課程項(xiàng)目的獨(dú)特興趣。

　　2、表現(xiàn)獨(dú)特性

　　描述你的重要經(jīng)歷，既可以是你興趣發(fā)展的歷史經(jīng)歷，也可以是增強(qiáng)你申請該課程決心的特殊經(jīng)歷，還可以是對你的人生產(chǎn)生深刻影響的經(jīng)歷。

　　3、表明可行性

　　你對學(xué)校、課程、研究領(lǐng)域、教授的了解將有助于為入學(xué)部工作人員留下深刻影響。你在解釋為什么你與申請課程相匹配時，這方面的內(nèi)容將加強(qiáng)可行性的說明（注：這方面的信息可以從網(wǎng)絡(luò)、學(xué)校資料等方面獲得）。

　　4、委婉地表達(dá)

　　你必須在個人陳述中誠懇地表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)和想法，但是必須策略地描述你的優(yōu)勢和不足，即以積極、肯定的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)你能夠滿足入學(xué)要求，委婉地表達(dá)你會改進(jìn)不足。特別是你的不足與入學(xué)要求相沖突時，這一點(diǎn)顯得尤為重要。

　　5、澳洲留學(xué)申請清晰陳述目標(biāo)

　　你必須在個人陳述中表明你所申請的課程將有助于你達(dá)到你的預(yù)定目標(biāo)。注意在寫作中靈活地使用短期目標(biāo)和長期目標(biāo)之間的辯證關(guān)系。

　　參考范文

　　Pick up any newspaper today and you can find many headlines related to stories about economic problems and trends. I am always deeply absorbed in the economic news， especially in the *ysis and description of the capital markets.

　　I was born in XX City， a large city with lots of heavy industry companies. My father is an engineer in a shipbuilding institute and my mother is a technician in an electronic apparatus factory. Since I was very young， they began to teach me plenty of knowledge of natural science and hoped me to become an engineer like them one day. But they changed their mind when they find me interested in the field of economics， an absolutely different area they were not familiar with. They agreed to send me to XXX Finance and Economic University which has been ranked in the top ten in my country by commerce economics.

　　In the year of 2000， I entered the faculty of Investing Economy of that university and started my four-year strict education. In the first two years， I laid more emphasis on the basic theories， such as models in economics and investing. Later in my 3rd and 4th semesters， I found that lacking of practice became a bottle neck of further studying. Fortunately， my graduated thesis tutor， Professor XXX and Teacher XXX provided me some good opportunities to practice in the Company of Nahu Real Estate and Sanxia Securities Company， in which I lived a substantial and pleasing time. Besides my major， computer science is my anther interest. In the last year of my university， I was certified with MCSE（Microsoft Certified System Engineer） and got a part time teaching job in Richinfo Teaching Center， which largely increased my communication abilities. When I finished my graduated thesis， I got the Bachelor s Degree of Economics successfully in July 2000.

　　On the day of 28 September 2004， I began my career in the accounting and funding department of Beijing XXX Company and was assigned the duty of investing. My company usually got irregular cash flows so lots of money was left unused. At first I followed my workmate， Mr. XX， a senior staff in my department and put only a little fund in the securities market. The initial success was a great encouragement to me and I began to invest more. 2002 was a golden year for me though the whole market was not good. In that year I admit 90，000 shares of the stock--Sea Oil Project and 50，000 shares of stock-Da Sha in thier Initial Public Offering and sell them in the same year. That brought us 1，100，000￥ profits before taxation and my work results was highly confirmed by the general manager and other colleagues. The luck continued to the first half year of 2003 until the stagnancy of the whole stock market in July. Now I am directly led by the general manager and do some management and marketing work as well.

　　The four years of working matured me rapidly not only in technique skills but also in abilities of communication and cooperation with colleagues and other person. With the opening policy of China s Capital Market， I realize internationalization is a trend I must make good preparations for. So I determined to go abroad to go on further learning about financial knowledge and improved my English skills and the course of master of finance will be my best choice.

　　Socialising is very important to me， and I am always keen to meet new people. I enjoy trying new culture and new foods. My good culinary skills will prove very useful to the daily life of my future foreign studying. I enjoy traveling and learning about modern history. Music is one of my biggest hobbies， and I use music to help me unwind and reflect on things. I use the internet to keep up with current affairs and sports news.

　　I have always been a keen sport*an， representing my school of basketball competition many times and now I often play it in the evening. I also enjoy playing tennis and table tennis， as well as football.

　　I believe that I have made sufficient preparations for a new university life. My skills together with my ambition to succeed prove me to be good candidate for your master degree.

　　Applicant： XXXX

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